Connecting Ideas Logically and Effectively
c) X The cost of the system must be taken into consideration.
Y Computerization would increase output by an estimated 800 per cent. (however)
I would suggest that we are currently not in a position to consider such a massive
capital outlay.
d) X The project would bring us no direct financial gain.
Y It would be an excellent exercise in public relations (while)
It cannot, therefore, be considered at the moment.
e) X Brunton and Denby have worked for us on similar projects in the past.
Y Brunton and Denby have now moved out of the area (who)
It will therefore be necessary for us to find a new firm of contractors.
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